tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post8369456246211817939..comments2023-05-04T05:09:25.749-06:00Comments on The stories of Bryan Young: GUEST STORY: True LustAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01086411448964347304noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-37862617850605940572011-04-21T06:13:03.338-06:002011-04-21T06:13:03.338-06:00I love it ! I'm a fantasy writer and I can'...I love it ! I'm a fantasy writer and I can't write shirt stories only long ones. Personally I don't like the ending cause it's sad but that's what makes the story better. Keep writing love stories.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-18736312232450768922011-03-30T00:37:30.599-06:002011-03-30T00:37:30.599-06:00Nicely wrote, seems like there is a quite brillian...Nicely wrote, seems like there is a quite brilliant poet sleeping inside the writer. Good work! <br /><br />But I think feeling of lust doesn't makes the love disappear. It is true that one person, at a time, can love many in same way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-29051399242558899632010-03-31T09:31:57.039-06:002010-03-31T09:31:57.039-06:00its really nyc nd interstin as well...bt it just p...its really nyc nd interstin as well...bt it just proves how cheap a guy cud b nd i insha allah i wud prefer nt to go around places where ladies are..cox who knows wen a guy wud fall for da godesss...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-26872059619972534702010-03-31T09:31:20.089-06:002010-03-31T09:31:20.089-06:00its really nyc nd interstin as well...bt it just p...its really nyc nd interstin as well...bt it just proves how cheap a guy cud b nd i insha allah i wud prefer nt to go around places where ladies are..cox who knows wen a guy wud fall for da godesss...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-45765434091507908052010-03-12T10:52:28.298-07:002010-03-12T10:52:28.298-07:00i think if its less poetic and more real life like...i think if its less poetic and more real life like it would be more appealing.<br /><br />Thats my view as i like that way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-47468905669438525572009-12-19T08:43:06.021-07:002009-12-19T08:43:06.021-07:00I like the way you write.
BUT GUYS SUCK !! All you...I like the way you write.<br />BUT GUYS SUCK !! All you fuckin care about is sex?! SO bLOODY cheap !!Anna Brighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09660824458005783407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18204364.post-67925475167096553192009-06-08T12:43:45.346-06:002009-06-08T12:43:45.346-06:00its nice, but i mean, transition, from the beginni...its nice, but i mean, transition, from the beginning to the end its like, BAM! u just slapped me in the face with yo emotion and now i think i'm gonna fight u. Relax the writing a bit, it dosn't need to be so intence rom beginning to end to interest me. In fact it makes me want to leave the story, i like that you want to write the story, but don't force it on me, give me time to savore your writing, instead of haveing to shove it all down in one sitting. I don't need quite that much information, not all the time, its a pretty idea, having two lovers prance around guiding each other through there activites, but everyone needs a break, and plus there is a bit of repetition, i got the feeling you began to run out of ways of staring, and watching, and pretty words are lovely, but i myself like a few average everyday words, so as not to ruin the special ones. i don't know if u can understand my critics here, but the stor itself was rather nice, a little less fluff and a little more buff would be what the story needs.Luang acronymnoreply@blogger.com